Question

17．第二节 书面表达
假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Michael正在一家孔子学院学习汉语和中国文化，知道中国人很重视家风传承．他在给你的电子邮件中想了解你家的家风以及家风对你的影响．请你给他回复一封电子邮件．开头已经给出，不计入总词数．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
3．参考词汇：家风family spirits
Dear Michael，
I'm glad to know that you are learning Chinese language and culture．Dear Michael，
I'm glad to know that you are learning Chiness language and culture．In your email you said that you wanted to know something about my family spirits．（高分句型一）Well，there are many good qualities that have been passed from generation to generation in my family．My pareents always lay emphasis on the importance of honesty，bravery，perseverance and diligence and they have set good examples for me and my brother．
My family spirits have a profound influence on me．（高分句型二）I'm always friendly to others and am always ready to help others．（高分句型三）I always cheer up and never stop chasing my goal even though I meet with difficulties．Owing great thanks to those good qualities，I have made great achievements in my study and life．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）Well，there are many good qualities that have been passed from generation to generation in my family．
该句使用了一个定语从句，即 that have been passed…修饰先行词good qualities，在定语从句中使用了现在完成的被动语态．
（高分句型二）I'm always friendly to others and am always ready to help others．
句子使用了两个并列短语be friendly to 和be ready to 表达家风对我的影响．
（高分句型三）I always cheer up and never stop chasing my goal even though I meet with difficulties．
这个句子使用了even though这个链接短语，意思是即使，尽管，使句子上下文语境链接顺畅．
固定短语：pass from generation to generation 从一代传到另一代；
lay emphasis on 强调；have a profound influence on 对…有深远的影响；

解答 One possible version
Dear Michael，
   I'm glad to know that you are learning Chiness language and culture．In your email you said that you wanted to know something about my family spirits．（高分句型一）Well，there are many good qualities that have been passed from generation to generation in my family．My pareents always lay emphasis on the importance of honesty，bravery，perseverance and diligence and they have set good examples for me and my brother．
   My family spirits have a profound influence on me．（高分句型二）I'm always friendly to others and  always ready to help others．（高分句型三）I always cheer up and never stop chasing my goal even though I meet with difficulties．Owing  to those good qualities，I have made great achievements in my study and life．
                                                                Yours，
                                                                Li Hua

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．