Question

短文改错

Dear Li Hua,
I have arrived in America for two months, and I	(1)______
have found school dances in American high schools were very	(2)______
popular. At my school, dances took place in the school	(3)______
gym, which floor is made of wood, so that students	(4)______
must dance in his socks. That is why a “socks hop”	(5)______
is a more popular name in a school dance. Every	(6)______
new school term, the school will organize evening socks hop.	(7)______
Some students sell soft drinks, hot dogs and other	(8)______
things to raise money, which go towards buying new	(9)______
school equipment. Isn't this interesting? Let's keep in touch.	(10)______

Answer 1

答案：略
解析：

(1) arrived→been arrive 为短暂性动词，不能与一段时间状语连用. (2) were→are 此句说明现状，而非过去.因此要用一般现在时. (3) took→take 应用一般现在时态. (4) which→whose whose此处代替the gym's，在定语从句中作定语修饰floor, which 无此用法. (5) his→their 主语students是复数，所以用their与之保持一致. (6) in→for for意为“适合于……” (7) evening 前加an hop是单数可数名词，前面用 an表示“种类”. (8) √ (9) go→goes which 此处代替不可数名词 money，谓语动词go应改为第三人称单数以和先行词money保持一致. (10) this→that that 指刚提到的以上的事情.