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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下便条。便条中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（ ^ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除；把多余的词用斜线（ \ ）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Mary,

Our city had changed a lot in the past 5 years. Firstly, more high buildings have appeared, that are modern and beautiful. Many overpasses have set up, so it has become very convenient for people to travel. However, many families have got car of their own. The people’s life here has become rich or colorful. People can enjoy themselves travelling on the holiday. To my delighted, I can taste delicious food of different countries. And now it is easy for me to keep touch with you than before, for I can email you in my office.

Yours,

Christine

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】had→has

【2】that→which

【3】have后加been

【4】Besides/Moreover/Furthermore/Additionally

【5】car→cars或car前加a

【6】or→and

【7】the去掉

【8】delighted→delight

【9】easy→easier

【10】keep后加in

【解析】

【1】根据句中in the past 5 years是与现在完成时连用的时间状语，故had→has。

【2】that前有逗号，说明是非限制性定语从句，代表主句所表述的这件事只能用which引导。

【3】该句的主语many overpasses是set up的动作承受者，故have后加been。

【4】根据前后句的关系修改，它们之间是递进关系，故改为Besides/Moreover/Furthermore/Additionally。

【5】单数可数名词不可单独使用，故car改为cars或者car前加不定冠词a。

【6】rich和colourful是并列关系，故or→and。

【7】on holiday在度假，固定短语，故去掉the。

【8】to one’s delight令某人高兴的是，to为介词，one’s为形容词性物主代词，故应用delight的名词形式。

【9】此处与下文的有了email的联系方式相比较，应改为easier。

【10】keep in touch with保持联系，为固定短语，故keep后加in。