Question

给朋友的建议信——如何学好英语。你的朋友Cheery进入高中后觉得学习英语的方式和初中相比有很大的不同，苦恼之余向你写信寻求建议。请你以李华的名义给她写一封回信，和她分享自己学习英语的体会，并给她提供一些英语学习方面的建议。
要点：1. 开始学习高中英语时，意识到其比初中英语难很多，不要丧失信心；
2. 意识到学习英语的重要性，对英语感兴趣；
3. 介绍日常学习生活中能够学好英语的方法；
4. 向老师和同学请教。
要求：词数100—120字。  
提示：初中：junior high school        高中：senior high school
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Best wishes!
Yours
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Cheery,
I am glad to have received your letter, and I happen to know something about your problem. To my surprise, you said you would give up learning English because you haven’t done well in it recently. You were not interested in it any longer and were going to give up.
I know it is not easy to learn English, but you should not lose heart. Go on learning it. You see, English is widely used in the world today and it will be an important tool in our future work. Besides, English has become more and more important in our daily life. Where there is a will, there is a way. Can’t you remember that? If you study hard, I’m sure you will succeed in the end.
I think listening, speaking, reading and writing are the essential parts in learning English. As for practicing listening, we can watch English films and listening to English songs. In our daily study, we can communicate with our English teachers, classmates and the foreigners. In order to strengthen our reading abilities, we can read newspapers, magazines and even the English novels. Once we read a lot and accumulate more, we will write good articles. We should always keep in mind that practice makes perfect. In addition, you can consult with your teachers and classmates about the ways of well learning English. During this process, you will gradually find you are fond of English. I’m looking forwards to hearing good news from you.
Best wishes!
Yours

试题分析：本文是一篇书信类应用文。文章给出了较详细的汉语提示，文章的话题涉及英语学习，此话题贴近学生生活，让学生有话可写。成文时应注意：1.文章内容要点要齐全。（1）开始学习高中英语时，意识到其比初中英语难很多，不要丧失信心；（2） 意识到学习英语的重要性，对英语感兴趣；（3） 介绍日常学习生活中能够学好英语的方法；（4） 向老师和同学请教。2.人称：第一人称和第二人称；3.时态：一般现在时；4.适当使用一些高级词汇、短语和句型，以提高文章档次；5.恰当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章表达自然、流畅。
【亮点说明】使用了从句：because you haven’t done well in it recently；Where there is a will, there is a way. If you study hard, I’m sure you will succeed in the end.；Once we read a lot and accumulate more, we will write good articles.使用非谓语动词短语：In order to strengthen our reading abilities, we can read newspapers, magazines and even the English novels.插入语：To my surprise, As for practicing listening, In addition, Besides,