Question

19．假设你是李华，今年你将毕业．在毕业晚会上，你将作为高三毕业生代表作一次简短的英语告别演讲．你的发言必须包括以下内容：
1、对三年高中生活的怀念；
2、对老师的真情感谢；
3、对母校的祝福．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，在毕业晚会上，作为高三毕业生代表作一次简短的英语告别演讲，写一篇发言稿．
写作时人称以第一人称和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主．
写作要点：1．对三年高中生活的怀念； 2．对老师的真情感谢  3．对母校的祝福．
重要短语：a couple of（一些），say goodbye to （对…说再见），full of…（充满…），be extremely grateful for…（特别感谢…），on behalf of（代表），extend sth（发出（邀请、欢迎等）），put sth into words（用言语表达）．
【高分句型】
1．To make the journey safe and fruitful，our great teachers contributed their time，energy，love and the whole heart．
此处是动词不定式作目的状语，逗号之后为主句．
2．It'll soon be the time for us to depart，though unwillingly．
此处是由"though"引导的从句中的省略，可以理解为"though it is unwilling"．

解答 My teachers and fellow students，
In a couple of weeks，we'll say goodbye to our mother school．How time flies!Now It's really hard for me to put my feelings into words．The past three years has been really a wonderful journey with you guys，full of laughter and tears．（对三年高中生活的怀念）
To make the journey safe and fruitful，our great teachers contributed their time，energy，love and the whole heart．【高分句型】Here，we are extremely grateful for all that you，dear teachers，have done for us．（对老师的真情感谢）
It'll soon be the time for us to depart，though unwillingly．【高分句型】But it is not the end．It just means that we're going to begin a new journey．Finally，on behalf of all the graduates present here，let me extend our sincere wishes for our mother school and respectable teachers．Thank you!（对母校的祝福）

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．