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短文改错 Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei Mountain in 　 Sichuan．As everyone knows, it’s famous 1．________ mountain with all kinds of plants and animals．The weather was fine．It 2．________ was about noon we arrived at the foot 3．________ of the mountain．The three of them 4．________ were very excited．As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting 5．________ temples and told stories．On the way up I was busy taking picture since the 6．________ scenery was so beautiful．The time passes 7．________ quickly．Evening came down．We spent 8．________ the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain．The food was expensive and 9．________ the service was good．I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my 10．________ head touched the pillow．

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1．famous前加a　峨嵋是一座山，要加不定冠词a。 　　2．√ 　　3．we前加when　前后是两个句子，用when表示时间。 　　4．them→us　前面是讲我们，这里也应该是指我们。 　　5．visiting→visited　三个动作fed, visited, told是并列的，时态应该一致。 　　6．picture→pictures　picture是可数名词，这里是复数含义，要加s。 　　7．passes→passed　全文都是过去时，这里出现一般现在时不合适。 　　8．去掉down　“夜晚来临”Evening came。 　　9．and→but　食物贵和服务好是转折关系。 　　10．去掉at　the moment后面可以直接跟一个句子表示时间，前面不需要介词。