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17．假设你是李华，你的一个英语笔友，加拿大的中学生Peter来信询问你正在阅读什么英语报刊，恰好这学期你订阅了《英语周报》（English Weekly）．请就一下信息用英语写一封回信，向他介绍相关情况．
1．《英语周报》历史悠久，于1983年4月在中国山西省创刊；
2．该报与教材联系紧密，使用方便，很受广大师生欢迎；
3．内容丰富：开辟有电影评论、名人轶事、运动娱乐等专栏．
4．因为它，你对英语更感兴趣了，也取得了很大进步．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．参考词汇：专栏：column 教材：textbook
Dear Peter，
I'm very glad to hear from you．It's my pleasure to tell you something about English Weekly，which I am using this term．（高分句型一）
English Weekly is an English learning newspaper with a long history，first published in April，1983 in Shanxi province，China．It is closely connected with the textbooks．Therefore，it is convenient for use．That is also why it is so popular with the teachers and students．Furthermore，it has rich contents，containing many interesting columns such as film reviews，celebrities，sports and amusements．（高分句型二）
In fact，I really benefit a lot from this newspaper．Because of it，I have become more and more interested in English and have made much progress in it．（高分句型三）
Best wishes!
Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假设你是李华，你的一个英语笔友，加拿大的中学生Peter来信询问你正在阅读什么英语报刊，恰好这学期你订阅了《英语周报》（English Weekly）．请就一下信息用英语写一封回信，向他介绍相关情况，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：．《英语周报》历史悠久，于1983年4月在中国山西省创刊；该报与教材联系紧密，使用方便，很受广大师生欢迎；内容丰富：开辟有电影评论、名人轶事、运动娱乐等专栏．因为它，你对英语更感兴趣了，也取得了很大进步．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：hear from收到…的信息；be connected with与…有联系；Therefore因此；Furthermore而且；In fact事实上；Because of由于；make progress 取得进步
It's my pleasure to tell you something about English Weekly，which I am using this term．（高分句型一）
Furthermore，it has rich contents，containing many interesting columns such as film reviews，celebrities，sports and amusements．（高分句型二）
Because of it，I have become more and more interested in English and have made much progress in it．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear peter，
       I am very glad to hear from you．It's my pleasure to tell you something about English Weekly，which I am using this term．（高分句型一）
       English Weekly is an English learning newspaper with a long history，first published in April，1983 in Shanxi province，China．It is closely connected with the textbooks．Therefore，it is convenient for use．That is also why it is so popular with the teachers and students．Furthermore，it has rich contents，containing many interesting columns such as film reviews，celebrities，sports and amusements．（高分句型二）
       In fact，I really benefit a lot from this newspaper．Because of it，I have become more and more interested in English and have made much progress in it．（高分句型三）
       Best wishes!
                                                                                                                  Yours，
                                                                                                                  Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．