Question

【题目】请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。

我们的班长

1.个人信息：李敏……（两点）

2.学习（英语）和工作

3.你的评价……

注意：1、词数：100词左右；2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Our Monitor

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Answer 1

【答案】Our Monitor

Li Min is our monitor. She is tall r healthy and lively. She does well in all subjects. She is fond of sports and is good at singing and dancing.

What impresses us is that she is very strict with herself in her work and daily life. She works hard at English. When she came to the school, she had quite a lot of difficulties with the English language. But she always tried tried to overcome them. She was active in class and did a lot of practice after class. No pains, no gains. With great efforts she made much progress in English study. What’s more, she is always assisting our teachers to run our class.

She is modest and always ready to help others. She sets us all a good example.

【解析】本文考查记叙文的写作。要求考生根据题目提供的信息，组织语言材料，编写成文。写作时要明确清楚地表达所给要点。本文是一篇描写人物的作文，要注意介绍人物的身份和主要事迹，最后不要忘记给出评价。第一段，开门点题描写人物的身份和外貌，切记言简意赅，长短句相间。第二段可以从两个方面描写人物的主要事迹：学习和工作，描写时要围绕一个主题句展开，层次分明，本段尽量多使用一些高级句型和短语，增强文章的可读性，提高文章的文采。第三段给出评价，结尾部分要干净利落，不啰嗦。同时注意在写作中过渡词和连接词的使用以及词数的限制。

范围亮点：范文要点齐全，流畅连贯，使用了较多高级句型和词汇：What impresses us is that…使用了主语从句和表语从句；When she came to the school…使用了状语从句；had quite a lot of difficulties with…是固定词组；No pains, no gains.是谚语；…she made much progress in English study使用了定语从句；sets us all a good example是固定搭配。