Question

Li Ling is the only one of the student in our class who have ever been to England. Last summer she is lucky to be sent there to study for three months. When she arrived in England by plane, she was picking up (接待)at the airport by the Johnson family, she would live with for the next few months.The family does everything they could to make Li Ling to feel at home. Li Ling began her study abroad at a middle school, where she met friends from all over world.
She made fully use of every minute to practise her spoken English and was highly thought of by all the people around him.

Answer 1

小题1:student（改为students）
小题2:have(改为has)
小题3: is(改为was)
小题4:picking（改为picked）
小题5:she前面（添加whom）
小题6:does（改为did）
小题7:（去掉to）
小题8:over后面（添加the）
小题9:fully （改为full）
小题10:him.(改为her)

试题分析：
小题1:One of后面接名词复数
小题2:定语从句的谓语是和先行词一致的，这句话的先行词是the only one of the student定语从句的谓语是单数。
小题3:时间是Last summer这句话是过去时
小题4:She和pick up是被动关系，用be done结构
小题5:这是非限制性定语从句，先行词是family，定语从句缺少宾语，关系代词whom不能省略
小题6:还是说在英国的事情，用一般过去式
小题7:Make sb do使某人做…，用省略to的不定式做宾语补足语
小题8:All over the world全世界
小题9:修饰名词use用形容词full
小题10:指代Li ling用her。
点评：本题考查较为细致，要求考生要特别耐心答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考察基础知识较多。平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺，符合逻辑。