Question

你叫李华。最近, 你们班同学就“地球一小时”（Earth Hour）活动展开了一场热烈的讨论。下表是这次讨论的结果。请你用英语给《中学英语报》主编写一封信, 介绍你们班的讨论结果并阐明你自己的观点。

60％的同学支持	40％的同学反对	你的看法
引起人们对全球气候变暖的关注	做秀, 意义不大	……
节约能源	收效甚微
全世界共同努力, 保护地球	给人们生活, 学习和工作带来不便
……	……

注意： 1.字数120左右      2.开头结果已给出,不计人总词数。

参考词汇：做秀show 不便inconvenience

Dear Editor,

Last week our class had a heated discussion on Earth Hour.  ____                  

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Yours

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Last week our class had a heated discussion on Earth Hour. Different students have different opinions about this activity．

About 60% of the students are in favor of it. As we all know, global warming is a big problem in the world. Earth Hour can raise people’s awareness of global warming. Besides, turning off lights for an hour is energy-saving. Only by working together can we make our earth a better place to live in.

However, about 40% of the students say this activity is not very meaningful. They think it is only a show and that it doesn’t make much difference. What’s more, turning off lights for an hour may cause inconvenience to people’s life, work and study.

In my opinion, this activity is of great importance. But one activity alone is not enough if we want to save energy and protect our earth. Let’s act through our day-to-day habits.

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于正反观点类的议论文，讨论的话题是“地球一小时”；要求同学们就此观点做出自己的选择并说明理由，本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

考点：考查正反观点类议论文

点评：本文题型是考生分词熟悉的正反观点类的议论文，在平时的练习中也有相应的模板。审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主，发表个人意见时使用第一人称。本文的要点均已给出，考生需要使用合适的连接词把孤立的要点联系成文。如for one thing, for another; besides, firstly, secondly, last but not least等。也要使用一些高级的词汇词组如 be supposed to do sth, benefit 等以提升文章的档次分。在文章红可以适当使用一至两句谚语如：Every coin has two sides等可以大大提高文章的文采，提高获得高分的可能性。