Question

短文改错： Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei 　 Mountain in Sichuan．As everyone knows, it's famous 1．________ mountain with all kinds of plants and animals．The weather 2．________ was fine．It was about noon we arrived at the foot of 3．________ the mountain．The three of them were very excited．As we 4．________ climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples 5．________ and told stories．On the way up I was busy taking picture 6．________ since the scenery was so beautiful．The time passes quickly． 7．________ Evening came down．We spent the night in a hotel at the top 8．________ of the mountain．The food was expensive and the service was 9．________ good．I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my 10．________ head touched the pillow．

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解析：

1．Mountain为可数名词，所以在famous之前加a。 　　2．该行没有错误。 　　3．此行有两个分句，中间无任何连接词，从句意看是个带有时间状语从句的复合句，所以noon和we之间加连词when。 　　4．从上下文可判断人称代词them应改为us。 　　5．Visit一词应该和前面的fed以及后面的told并列，故改visiting为visited。 　　6．Picture应该是复数。 　　7．从上下文可知pass的时态应是过去时态，即passed。 　　8．由于受中文影响，“夜幕降临”以为是came down，实际上应该去掉down。 　　9．And应改为but，因为两句之间是转折关系。 　　10．应该去掉at，因为名词短语the moment起连词的作用可以引导时间状语从句，表示“一…就”，相当于as soon as。而at the moment是“此刻；那时”的意思，在句中作时间状语。