三、开放作文(15分)
请根据下面提示,写一篇短文。词数不少于50。
In your English class,you are asked to describe the following picture and explain to your classmates how you understand it.
One possible version:
In the picture we can see two kids looking at the sun shining far away behinde the mountains , to which a winding path lead , obviously they are expecting a promising future , but there is a long way to go and they will meet with some difficulties and challenges on their way to their dream , the key to success is great determination and strong will , like the two kids , we are faced with difficulties and challenges every day ,it is only when we make up our minds and work heart and soul that we will live our lives to the fullest and reach our goal at last .
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第二节开放作文
请根据下面提示,写一篇短文。词数不少于50。
In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.
基本分析:
1. 三分之一描写要点:阳光,楼(很靠近),弯曲的树。(the sun, two apartments/ flats closely-located, the winding/ twisted tree)
2. 三分之二议论着眼立意:
—— 1.人生角度:在成长的道路上(树的成长),有曲折,有困难,(建筑的阻挡,弯曲)但是只要向着光明和希望(太阳)去努力拼搏,坚持不懈,还是能够冲破桎梏取得成功(树在楼的夹缝中长高了,超出建筑)。
—— 2.和谐角度: 城市的发展(建筑)和环境的可持续发展(树的成长)要协调,要平衡,才能欣然共存(在阳光下)
3. 立意与现实生活关系:1. 引导90后要具有积极的生活态度,生活非一帆风顺的。2. 扣住低碳生活的环保热点,城市和环境的和谐发展也是低碳生活的必需。
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