Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你要完成一项关于中英学生寒假生活的调查。请给你的英国笔友Bill写一封信，交流相关信息。要点如下：
1）写信的原因；
2）介绍中国学生的寒假生活；
①时长：约20天
②活动
3）询问英国学生的寒假生活。
注意：1）词数100左右；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3）信的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
Dear Bill,

Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Bill

I'm doing a project on how British and Chinese students spend their winter holidays. In China, the winter vacation is usually about twenty days long. It falls during the Chinese New Year, so most students take part in different Spring Festival activities, such as visiting family, eating lots of foods, and most importantly, getting lucky money! During the holiday many students will also go traveling with their parents. Unfortunately ,they can't travel for long ,because Chinese students always have a lot of homework to do during this break. Many must even attend special holiday classes. What about in the UK? How do the students spend the winter holidays there?

I'm looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】首先确定文章的体裁，本题所要求写的书面表达是书信，主要是介绍中国学生寒假生活和询问英国学生的寒假生活。然后确定文章时态，本文应用一般现在时态。
本题中的内容要点有：
①.写信的目的；
②.介绍中国学生的寒假生活（约20天；活动）
③.询问英国学生的寒假生活。这样确定文章的基本段落分为两段或三段。
最后，尝试用高级词汇，使可读性增强。美化句子可以采用复合句和特殊的句型结构，也可以采用形式主语、形式宾语或简略句来实现。连句成篇，在连句成篇的过程中需要注意过渡句和连接词的使用。