某中学生英语报正开展以“美好生活”为题的征文，请你结合自身经历用英文写一篇征文稿，要点如下：
★ 亲身经历的一件事（如：同学的帮助、朋友的支持、老师的关心或亲人的爱护等）；
★ 对美好生活的感受；
★ ……
注意：1. 词数：100左右；
2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节；
3. 文中不能出现与本人相关的具体信息。
In our daily life, everyone can get help from our classmates, support from our friends, concern from our teachers and love from our parents. All these make our life beautiful and happy.
I have something moving to share with you. Two months ago, I was badly ill. I had to be in hospital for a long time. Unfortunately, my family was too poor to afford it. When I was in trouble, one of my classmates named Li Hua decided to raise money for me. Everyone in our class took out their pocket money. What’s more, they went to the streets on Sunday to collect money from others. When they sent all the money to me, my parents and I were deeply moved.
Maybe sometimes we feel unlucky, but we should believe: Life is beautiful. Help and love will be around us forever.
【解析】这是一篇记叙文写作。主要讲述一下你身边发生的让人感动或者道德模范的事，并注意添加一些自己对此事的感想，以及对美好生活的展望，写作时要注意适当增加细节，以保证文章的连贯性。文章中第一段第一句In our daily life, everyone can get help from our classmates, support from our friends, concern from our teachers and love from our parents.就使用了四个排比的词组，使作者本身要表达的内容更加透彻，新颖，有吸引力。清晰地表达了我们日常生活中从周围同学，朋友，老师，父母那得到了许多帮助，支持，关心和爱；第二段第一句I have something moving to share with you.使用了定于从句，并且省略掉which is，语言简洁，逻辑清晰；第二段第三句When I was in trouble, one of my classmates named Li Hua decided to raise money for me.也使用了定于从句，这样引出人名更为深刻；第二段第四句Everyone in our class took out their pocket money.也使用了定语从句；在短语应用上，也十分简练，too…to…太……而不能，raise money和collect money募捐；在词语应用上也显出独特风格，Everyone in our class took out their pocket money. 一般我们用的话可能会说Everyone in our class tried their best to help us…用pocket money 可见我的同学们是很努力地在帮我。总结：写作时对于一些常用的词组，要注意用其他形式以更为简练的表达自己的观点。
考点：考查记叙文写作
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