Question

10．假定你是李华，得知你的外国笔友Peter获得了"汉语桥"世界大学生中文演讲比赛一等奖．你为他感到骄傲，并给他写一封祝贺信，要点如下：
1．天天练习讲汉语，从不会到流利，终于成功．
2．继续努力，有机会来中国留学．
3．希望见面和交流．
注意：1．词数100左右．2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
3．开头语和结束语已为你写好．
参考词汇："汉语桥"世界大学生中文演讲比赛："Chinese Bridge"Chinese speech contest
Dear Peter，
I would like to express my congratulations to you on your receiving the first prize of"Chinese Bridge"Chinese speech contest．
I know that you were not good at Chinese at first．However，you practiced speaking Chinese every day．As the saying goes，"Everything comes to him who waits"．Finally，you succeeded!In my mind，this match is very difficult for a foreign student．So I'm so surprised that you become champion of this competition．If you go on studying Chinese harder，you will have the opportunity to study in China．At last，I hope to see you and communicate with each other．
Sincere congratulations to you again!
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇给材料作文，本文只给出了主要写作要点．写作中要注意从三个方面进行叙述，并自己补充一到两点．动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题．注意不要遗漏要点，做到语句通顺．写作中注意使用连接词，序数词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．
亮点句型一：As the saying goes，"Everything comes to him who waits"．常言道："等待的人都会得到一切．"本句是as引导的非限制性定语从句，as指代人们说的内容．
亮点句型二：If you go on studying Chinese harder，you will have the opportunity to study in China．如果你努力继续学习汉语，你将有机会在中国学习．本句中if引导了条件状语从句，主句用将来时，从句用一般现在时表将来时．

解答 Dear Peter，
       I would like to express my congratulations to you on your receiving the first prize of"Chinese Bridge"Chinese speech contest．
       I know that you were not good at Chinese at first．However，you practiced speaking Chinese every day．As the saying goes，"Everything comes to him who waits"．（亮点句型一）Finally，you succeeded!In my mind，this match is very difficult for a foreign student．So I'm so surprised that you become champion of this competition．If you go on studying Chinese harder，you will have the opportunity to study in China．（亮点句型二）At last，I hope to see you and communicate with each other．
      Sincere congratulations to you again!
                                                                                                                                                                                                     Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                     Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．