Question

【题目】假设你叫李华，你的英国笔友Jack不久前去美国留学，他给你写信说很不适应那里的生活。请你根据以下提示用英语给他写封回信，鼓励他勇敢面对。

1.了解当地生活习惯，尊重当地风俗；

2.与美国学生多交流；

3.多参加户外活动；

4.注意与人交流的礼仪。

注意：

1.内容应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。

2.词数：100左右。信的开头和结尾己经写好，不计入总词数。

3.参考词汇：课外活动：activities after class

Dear Jack,

I'm really glad to hear from you and know how you are getting along.________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jack,

I’m really glad to hear from you and know you are getting along.I think it is common for you not to get used to the life there.Here I have some suggestions for you.First of all,you should respect local customs and involve yourself in the native’s lives.Just as a saying goes,“when in Rome,do as the Romans do”.Secondly,don’t forget to communicate with American students and make friends with them.Friendship will bring you happiness.What’s more, it is better for you to take more outdoor activities with your friends,which may help you relax and have fun.Finally, mind your own manners and remain modest and honest when getting along with your friends.

I hope you can adapt to your new life soon and enjoy your stay there.

Keep in touch.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封信件；你的英国笔友Jack不久前去美国留学，他给你写信说很不适应那里的生活，你根据以下提示用英语给他写封回信，鼓励他勇敢面对：了解当地生活习惯，尊重当地风俗；与美国学生多交流；多参加户外活动；注意与人交流的礼仪。时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：get used to （适应），suggestion（建议），respect local customs（尊重当地风俗），involve yourself in（参与），communicate with（与……交流），make friends with（交朋友），take more outdoor activities（多参加户外活动），mind your own manners（注意自己的礼仪）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【亮点说明】

范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如定语从句What’s more, it is better for you to take more outdoor activities with your friends,which may help you relax and have fun.；状语从句及省略Finally, mind your own manners and remain modest and honest when getting along with your friends.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。文中First of all，Secondly，What’s more，Finally使得文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。