Question

8．进入高三以来，同学们普遍感到压力倍增．就此问题，最近你班开展了一次以"压力"为主题的班会．在班会上，大家各抒己见，就如何缓解压力提出了自己的看法．请你为学校英文报写一篇短文，内容要点包括：
1．压力的来源．
2．压力与成败的关系．
3．你自己的看法．
注意：1．词数：不少于120词；
2．开头已给出，不计入总词数．
Recently we have held a class meeting to discuss the pressure upon Senior Three students．
                                                     

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
We are anxious that we'll not live up to the expectations of parents and teachers．
高分句型二：
Honestly speaking，on one hand，pressure is the source of motivation to success，which can contribute to personal progress．
句型一that we'll not live up to the expectations of parents and teachers．该句是一个宾语从句，该宾语从句位于形容词之后，that在从句中只做引导词，不作句子成分．、
句型二 which can contribute to personal progress．该句是一个由which引导的非限制性定语从句，在该从句中which做主语，替代前面出现的整个主句的内容．

解答 Recently we have held a class meeting to discuss the pressure upon Senior Two students．As the university entrance exam is approaching nearer，we all feel the pressure is piling up．（压力来源）We are anxious that we'll not live up to the expectations of parents and teachers．（高分句型一）
  Honestly speaking，on one hand，pressure is the source of motivation to success，which can contribute to personal progress．（高分句型二）On the other hand，too much pressure can lead to failure．In that case，approaches to solving pressure seem of vital importance．As for me，communication counts．It can help me express my emotion and get relief．
  To begin with，there must be sorrows we can't go through by ourselves，which need sharing with others．Furthermore，by communicating with parents and teachers，we can get more supports．In one word，the more you show your troubles，the better others understand you．As a result，you are more likely to get help and improve yourself．（发表看法）

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