Question

阅读下面李明的竞选演讲稿，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Dear fellow students:
I am Li Ming from Class Two, Senior Three. Today I am very glad to stand here and run for the post of chairman of the Students’ Union of our school. I think I am a very active person and always ready to help those who need help. Furthermore, I have the experience to have been the monitor of our class for 3 years and keen on the service for you, so I am sure I am qualified for it.
If I am lucky enough to win the election, the first thing I will do is to enrich our students’ after-class activities. Owing to the efforts of our school, now more and more students have got involved in various after-class activities. I think they have benefited us a lot, because after a whole day’s heavy work, it is great to have a relaxation from the activities, which will not only improve our social ability but also make us healthier. However, not all of us have realized that yet.
Also I will do something to improve our study activities. So please give me a chance and vote for me. Believe in me. I am your best choice!
That’s all, thank you!
［写作内容］
1．以约30个词概括以上演讲的主要内容。
2．以约120个词发表你的看法，内容包括：
（1）你是否赞成李明当选学生会主席并说明理由；
（2）你是否赞成他提出的加强课外活动的建议，为什么？
（3）谈谈你最喜欢的课外活动及其对你的影响。
［写作要求］
1．作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
［评分标准］
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。

Answer 1

概述一：The speech by Li Ming, （who is) a candidate for the chairman of the Students' Union, explains why he is fit for the position and what he is going to do if successfully elected.
概述二： Li Ming made this speech to run for  the position of the chairman of the Students' Union. In the speech he shows he is fit for the position and  he is going to organize some activities if successfully elected.
（1）你是否赞成李明当选学生会主席并说明理由；
Personally, I think Li Ming is the best choice, so I'll vote for such an active and kind-hearted person to be  the chairman of the Students' Union. He states in his speech that he is always eager to help others. Besides, he has ever been a monitor for three years, so he has the ability and experience to serve the students. Above all, his three years' working experience as a monitor proves that he possesses outstanding leadership and management skills.
（2）你是否赞成他提出的加强课外活动的建议，为什么？
From his speech, I think highly of his suggestion about enriching after-class activities. Colorful after-class activities will free students' mind from study pressure.  And such activities can provide students with chances to enrich their experience. Thus colorful after-class activities will benefit students both mentally and physically.
（3）谈谈你最喜欢的课外活动及其对你的影响。
My favorite after-class activity is swimming. Each time I get tired with study, after school I'll go swimming. Swimming makes me totally relaxed. After swimming half an hour or one hour and a half, I usually become energetic. Sometimes I can feel as if I was recharged with energy, so I can go on with my study.
I think colorful after-class activities can benefit students, so it is a better choice to select Li Ming.

解析试题分析：本篇短文是李明自己阐述自己适合学生会主席的理由以及当选以后他的计划。从李明的阐释里一个看出来他准备的很充分，能力也很强，有自己的思想和打算，适合做学生会主席。对于他加强课外活动的建议也表示认同，因为可以丰富学生的经验，给学生提供更多的机会让学生从中受益。最后在阐述自己最喜欢的活动的时候，可以举游泳，篮球等，从中学会了团队合作的精神等等。
考点：考查议论性短文的写完
点评：本作文的要点较散，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。