Question

下面短文中共有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者 （从第11处起） 不计分。   
Three years ago, I became a student in an ordinary school.  Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I find the teachers patient and considerate.  However, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class.  I decided to make the best for it.  I worked hardly and got along well with teachers and classmates.  Whenever I had difficulties, they were always available.  Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, what greatly increased my confidence and I got more motivated.  My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but that how you use it that determine who you are.

Answer 1

【小题1】disappointing—disappointed
【小题2】find—found
【小题3】However—Besides或Also或 Moreover
【小题4】for—of
【小题5】hardly—hard
【小题6】teachers 前加my或the
【小题7】student—students 
【小题8】what—which
【小题9】去掉but后的that
【小题10】determine—determines

解析试题分析：
【小题1】disappointing修饰某事  disappointed修饰某人
【小题2】文章开头Three years ago所以应是过去时，find改成found
【小题3】however改成Besides或Also或 Moreover ，此处不存在转折关系。而是与前面的表示并列
【小题4】固定搭配make the best of 好好利用
【小题5】hard的形容词 副词 相同，均为hard  而hardly表示几乎不
【小题6】老师应是特制的 故要加my或the
【小题7】one of 后面要用复数 表示 …之一
【小题8】非限制性定语从句。从句中缺主语，关系代词不能用what，用which
【小题9】but后已经是一个完整的句子，不用加that
【小题10】it后的that指代it 故从句中要用第三人称单数。
考点：考查短文改错
点评：考查考生在上下文中运用语法的能力，要特别注意固定的词组或者句型和名词的单复数形式以及时态。