Question

当前私家车在你们城市发展势头迅猛，但它带来许多便利的同时，也带来了一些弊端。上个月你们班就“私家车迅速发展的利与弊”进行了热烈的讨论，请根据下表提供的内容，客观介绍讨论的情况，并谈谈你自己的看法。

优势	弊端	你的观点
1.价格合理，普通家庭能买的起。 2．方便，可以提高生活质量。 3．可以带动其他产业提供更多的就业机会。	1.消耗大量能源，污染环境。 2．造成交通拥挤。 3.停车场地紧张。	？

注意：
1．对所给要点，不要简单翻译，要有适当发挥。
2．词数：150 左右。
3．参考词汇：
消耗consume (?vt?.)?尾气the waste gas

Answer 1

Last month we had a heated discussion about the advantages and disadvantages of the rapid development of private cars in our city．People's opinions are quite different.?Firstly, car prices are reasonable, so owning a private car is no longer a dream for ordinary families．Secondly, people are enjoying its convenience and better life quality as well．What's more, some related industries have also been brought about, which contributes to more employment However, besides the advantages mentioned above, there also exist some disadvantages．Cars consume too much energy, and the waste gas from cars pollutes the environment．What's worse, there are not enough roads and traffic jams occur in the rush hours．Apart from that, people find it hard to park their cars due to the lack of parking lots．?
I strongly recommend the number of private cars be limited and public bus service be improved．The government should also take measures to reduce pollution.

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