Question

【题目】请阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150 词左右的文章。

Li Jiang

When I was in the primary school, I often met with problems which I could not work out on my own, especially in English and arithmetic. So I downloaded an online educational app named Zuoyebang. Since then, I have been using several kinds of such software, for example, Xuebajun and Haofenshu. Whenever I have a problem, I will turn to them. As a result, my study has been progressing steadily. I will strongly recommend these apps to my friends.

Li Jiang

When I was in the primary school, I often met with problems which I could not work out on my own, especially in English and arithmetic. So I downloaded an online educational app named Zuoyebang. Since then, I have been using several kinds of such software, for example, Xuebajun and Haofenshu. Whenever I have a problem, I will turn to them. As a result, my study has been progressing steadily. I will strongly recommend these apps to my friends.

Su Hua

After entering the senior high, I found I had more and more difficulty learning maths and English. As many online learning products are quite popular among other students, my parents subscribed to one for me too. After that, however, I feel as if I were going to two schools, one real-world school and one online school. Every day I have endless exercises to do and feel very tired. Worse still, I feel I have lost interest in my study now. What shall I do?

Su Hua

After entering the senior high, I found I had more and more difficulty learning maths and English. As many online learning products are quite popular among other students, my parents subscribed to one for me too. After that, however, I feel as if I were going to two schools, one real-world school and one online school. Every day I have endless exercises to do and feel very tired. Worse still, I feel I have lost interest in my study now. What shall I do?

（写作内容）

1. 用约30个词概括上述利用在线教育app学习的现象；

2. 你是支持还是反对利用在线教育app学习？请谈谈你的看法，并用2 – 3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。

（写作要求）

1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3. 不必写标题。

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Answer 1

【答案】As the Internet combines deeply with education, online learning apps are springing up. Many students have adopted them as efficient learning tools, which may also have negative effects on other students. (31词)

In my opinion, online learning apps are an inseparable part of a student’s life and should be welcomed. After all they are of great help to our study. For example, when I meet with a problem I can’t work out after a few attempts, I will turn to my tutors there. A simple click of the button will bring me the answers, often with detailed analysis and different solutions. Besides, by participating in activities such as talent shows on such websites, I have enjoyed myself and gained confidence.

Of course, it is unwise to rely wholly on such online learning apps. However, they can serve as good helpers to us if we learn to employ their advantages and avoid the disadvantages. (153词)

【解析】

本文是一篇读写任务类书面表达，要求考生用约30个词概括利用在线教育app学习的现象；说明自己是支持还是反对在线app学习，并提出自己的看法。本文对考生运用语言能力及思维能力要求极高，难度非常大。

第1步：审题。根据文字提示可知本文是一篇议论文，要求考生概括利用在线教育app学习的现象；说明自己是支持还是反对在线app学习，并提出自己的看法。

第2步：组织要点。短文概要：随着因特网和教育的结合，在线教育蓬勃发展，很多学生都运用了再线教育，同时这种学习新模式也有一些负面影响。个人观点：在线教育是学生生活中重要的一部分，对学生学习有一定帮助。但是完全依靠在线教育也是错误的，应该本在线教育当成学校教育的有益补充。

第3步：根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句，关键词为combine with、spring up、adopt … as efficient learning tools、have negative effects on 、of great help to、work out、gained confidence、serve as good helpers 等。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。