Question

【题目】假设你是李华。你校英语演讲协会将选举新一届主席，你欲参选。请用英语写一篇演讲稿，要点包括：1.你的个人优势；

2.未来活动设想；

3.希望当选。

注意：1.字数100词左右；

2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾己为你写好，但不计入总词数。

Good afternoon,dear friends!My name is Li Hua.I am honoured to have a chance to run for the president of the English Speech Association._________________________________________________________________

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Thank you!

Answer 1

【答案】Good afternoon,dear friends!My name is Li Hua.I am honoured to have a chance to run for the president of the English Speech Association.

Having considered what kinds of abilities the position requires,I feel I am qualified First of all.I'm fluent in oral English and have worked as a part-time travel guide for foreigners.Secondly,I am outgoing,warm-hearted and really good at communicating with strangers. Moreover,I like giving speeches publicly I think it's a good way to build one's confidence.

If I am elected.I will organize different kinds of activities such as English Culture Festival and English Coffee Time,where students will have many chances to practice and improve their English I will try my best to be a good president if I am given a chance.

Thank you.

【解析】试题分析：

本次作文要求用英语写一篇演讲稿来竞选新一届主席。写作要点包括：

1.竞选职位：英语演讲协会将选举新一届主席。

2.个人优势：（1）英语口语流利而且曾兼职过外国人的导游（2）性格开朗、热心，善于与陌生人打交道。（3））更为重要的是喜欢在公众场合演讲。3.中选后的决心及设想。组织各种活动让学生们有更多的机会练习英语和提高英语水平，尽力成为一届好的主席。

写作亮点：本篇要点齐全，紧扣主题，行文连贯，结构连贯。其句式多变化，使得文章生动而流畅，体现了作者驾驭句式的能力，整个文章一气呵成。

写作中使用多个复杂句子。例如：

运用了状语从句If I am elected.　I will organize different kinds of activities和I will try my best to be a good president if I am given a chance.状语从句。

运用了定语从句where students will have many chances to practice and improve their English。

使用了宾语从句Having considered what kinds of abilities the position requires 。

运用了表示顺序的连接词，如first of all, secondly,　moreover.

使用变化多样的句式。如使用了非谓语Having considered what kinds of abilities the position requires, I feel I am qualified。