Question

1．假定你是星光中学的高三学生李华，母校将为高一新生举办主题为"What to learn in  high school？"的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会．请根据以下提纲准备一份英语发言稿．
1．学会学习：方法、习惯等．
2．学会做人：真诚、友善等．
3．其他方面：考生自拟．
注意：1．词数120词左右；
     2．发言稿开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Good morning，everyone!It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in high school．                            

Answer 1

分析 本文为应用文---写一发言稿，属于提纲作文．在写作时应使用第一人称，时态主要为一般现在时为主．重要短语：challenging （有挑战性的），efficiently （有效地），achieve academic goals （实现学术目标），develop a good habit （养成好的习惯），benefit sb（对某人有利），get involved in（牵扯到，卷入，涉及…..），get along well with（与…..相处融洽）．
高分句型一：
It is my honor to be share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school．能在此与大家分享高中学习经验是我的荣幸．
高分句型二：
Developing a good habit is also of importance．养成一个高习惯是非常重要的．
句型一 what to learn in senior high school 该部分为what+to do 直接充当宾语，放在介词on的后面
句型二 Developing a good habit is also of importance 该句的主语为动名词短语充当，动名词以及动名词短语作主语时，谓语应使用单数

解答 Good morning，everyone!It is my honor to be share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school．（高分句型一）
       In the coming three years，our school life will be challenging．Firstly，we should learn to learn efficiently．Personally，I used to try effective methods to achieve my academic goals．Developing a good habit is also of importance．（高分句型二）It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons，get actively involved in class，and review what had been taught after class．（学会学习）
      In addition，we should learn how to get along well with others．In school，I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates．It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere．（学会做人）
      Finally，we should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently．They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life．（其他方面）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．