Question

【题目】假定你是李华，正在英国的一所中学做交换生。你校的中国书法俱乐部正在招募成员，请 你给该俱乐部的负责人John写一封邮件申请加入。内容包括：

1.表明意图；

2.给出理由；

3.期待回复。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：中国书法俱乐部Chinese Calligraphy Club;招募recruit

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear John,

I am Li Hua, an exchange student in our school. Having heard that Chinese Calligraphy Club in our school is recruiting members, I am writing to apply to be a member of it and I’m sure I’m suitable for it.

First of all, I am so enthusiastic about Chinese calligraphy that I often practice it, thus becoming quite good at it. Besides, I have been learning knowledge about Chinese calligraphy, so I can help other members to get to know about it. In addition, I can speak English fluently, which enables me to communicate with others easily.

Please take my application into careful consideration. I’m looking forward to your earliest reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给你校的中国书法俱乐部的负责人John写一封邮件申请加入该俱乐部。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和现在完成时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1. 表明意图。（indicate your intention）

2. 给出理由。（give some reasons）

3. 期待回复。（look forward to reply）

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

exchange student; recruit members; be suitable for; be enthusiastic about; enable sb. to do; take sth. into consideration; look forward to

第三步：连词成句

1. I am Li Hua, an exchange student in our school.

2. Having heard that Chinese Calligraphy Club in our school is recruiting members, I am writing to apply to be a member of it and I’m sure I’m suitable for it.

3. First of all, I am so enthusiastic about Chinese calligraphy that I often practice it, thus becoming quite good at it.

4. Besides, I have been learning knowledge about Chinese calligraphy, so I can help other members to get to know about it.

5. In addition, I can speak English fluently, which enables me to communicate with others easily.

6. Please take my application into careful consideration.

7. I’m looking forward to your earliest reply.

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

第五步：润色修改