Question

请看下面两幅图，你有什么感想？请就此写一段话，内容应包括:
· 这幅图说明了一个什么现象？对此你是怎么看的？
· 简述父母对你的意义。
· 我们该为父母做些什么？
· 也可写你其他的一些观点。
注意：（1）词数不少于80；
（2）在答题卷上作答。
 
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               

Answer 1

As is vividly depicts in the cartoon, the old man is sitting on the coach with disappointment and sadness, because no one comes back to celebrate with them. Although they received a lot of presents from their children, they feel very miserable.
Nowadays, young men look so busy and independent that they move out and mind their own business every day. On usual days, they would not like to take their time to visit their parents with the excuses of busyness. On some festival days, they probably share a little time to drop in their parents or even just send some presents but don’t show up personally.
Recently, a new law came into effect, which urges young people to visit their parents frequently . However busy we may be, we should spend more time talking with them and accompanying them, because they once gave us so much selfless love that we should return them the same from the bottom of our heart.

解析试题分析：这是一篇漫画作文，谈论的是孝敬父母和近期出台的探望父母的法律的话题。看图作文要求考生将画面所包含的有效信息直接运用英语思维转换成英语语言文字，再根据这些要点谋篇布局。要求考生把看到的图画用文字表达出来，除了能表达清楚图画中的信息外，考生还需要根据词数要求，适当拓展并发挥想象，从而使文章的叙述不单调。考生首先要对图画的内容进行描述，然后围绕图画的信息进行说明或议论。此时考生一定要注意把握图画的中心思想，写出图画要反映的内容。写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】As is vividly depicts in the cartoon, the old man is sitting on the coach with disappointment and sadness, because no one comes back to celebrate with them.这句话用了非限制性定语从句和原因状语从句，Although they received a lot of presents from their children, they feel very miserable.这句话用的是让步状语从句， Nowadays, young men look so busy and independent that they move out and mind their own business every day. 这句话是用了so…that…句型， Recently, a new law came into effect, which urges young people to visit their parents frequently 这也是非限制性定语从句，However busy we may be, we should spend more time talking with them and accompanying them这句话用了however引导的让步状语从句。
考点：考查漫画作文