Question

假设你是李明，刚从学校安排的“澳大利亚行”返回北京。请给在澳大利亚时借住的家庭写一封信，信的内容主要包括：

1．你已安全返回北京

2．感谢他们的热情接待

1）去机场迎接

2）Jenny陪伴游览名胜古迹

3．希望他们有时间来北京游览

Dear Mr and Mrs Johnson,

I’m writing to tell you that________________________________________________________

Best wishes,

Li Ming

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Dear Mr and Mrs Johnson,

I’m writing to tell you that I had a safe journey back to Beijing. Thanks to your hospitality, I had a wonderful time in Australia. It was my first time to go abroad and I was naturally a bit nervous when I first arrived. When I saw you at the airport, however, I knew from your warm smile of welcome that everything would be all right. With Jenny’s help, I visited so many places of interest in Australia, which leaves me quite a good memory. I hope some day you will come to visit Beijing and I can return your kindness.

Best wishes,

Li Ming

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。