Question

【题目】书面表达（满分25分）

假设你是星光中学的学生李华，最近你要参加“汉字英雄”比赛，你的外国好友Tom经常参加各种大型比赛，有着非常丰富的比赛经验，赛前就如何调整心态你向他寻求意见，请根据以下要点写一封邮件：

1. 比赛的简单介绍；

2. 寻求意见；

3. 表达感谢。

注意：

1.词数120左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

How have you been recently? Everything is going well here. But I’m writing to you in order to get some help from you.

I an going to participate in the Chinese Character Hero competition, which is aimed at giving teenagers the opportunity to show their level of Chinese characters and giving them a stage to perform. I attach a great deal of importance to this competition and really want to show my best, but I’m quite nervous. I know you have taken part in many competitions before and must have a lot of experience in how to adjust the state of mind. I hope you can give me some suggestions to reduce my nervousness.

With your help, I’m sure I will get a good result in this competition. Thank you very much. I’m looking forward to your reply!

Your sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于书信，根据提示信息和要求来写作。写作时注意以下几点：1. 仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2. 要依据提示信息或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。写书信时要注意提示所给的要点有逻辑顺序的表达。3. 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时和一般将来时。4. 注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，包含了题目中所含的三个要点：1. 比赛的简单介绍；2. 寻求意见；表达感谢。除此之外，文章使用了多种句式和结构。比如 I am going to participate in the Chinese Character Hero competition, which is aimed at giving teenagers the opportunity to show their level of Chinese characters and giving them a stage to perform.运用了复杂的定语从句；With your help, I’m sure I will get a good result in this competition. 是with引导的条件句。此外，文章还使用了大量短语participate in , aimed at, attach a great deal of importance, taken part in, looking forward to等，使得文章更加流畅，同时也更具文采。