Question

最近，你们学校每天晚上组织学生收看《新闻联播》。对此，有人表示反对，认为学习任务繁重，耽误学习；也有人表示赞同，认为能使自己身心放松，而且了解国内外大事。请你写一篇100词左右的短文，发表一下自己的观点。开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Recently our school has set aside some time for students to watch The Daily News Broadcasting.
 
 

Answer 1

Recently our school has set aside some time for students to watch The Daily News Broadcasting.
Some people approve of the idea, and they think it is a good way to relax after a day’s hard work. Besides, they can also take advantage of the chance to know what is happening at home and abroad.
However, others are strongly against it. They say they bear so heavy a learning load that they can’t spare any time for TV. Therefore, they think it is a waste of time.
As for me, I’m in favor of the idea. Being buried in books all day does harm to us students both physically and mentally. By watching TV, we can have access to the information that cannot be obtained from books and help us to communicate and understand each other better.

试题分析：考查话题作文。首先确定题材。确定正反方观点。对正反方观点进行梳理，简化加工相应的句子。分析中文句式的特点，启发学生将无主句变成有主句，将难句简单化。正方观点：一部分人赞同晚上观看《新闻联播》,他们认为：观看《新闻联播》能有助于他们放松身心；观看《新闻联播》可以让他们了解国内外所发生的重大事件；观看《新闻联播》可以丰富他们的生活。反方观点：另一部分人反对晚上观看《新闻联播》,他们认为：他们每天很多功课要做；看《新闻联播》与他们高考一点关系都没有；看《新闻联播》会浪费他们太多时间。作者的观点：看《新闻联播》有助于拓宽视野；看《新闻联播》有助于明确为何要学习。因此，会增加学习的动力，所以赞成观看《新闻联播》。
【亮点说明】.范文出彩的地方很多：熟练运用了高中阶段的重点短语和句型：set aside，approve of ，take advantage of ，in favor of ，do harm to，have access to。Besides, they can also take advantage of the chance to know what is happening at home and abroad.这句话用了宾语从句，Being buried in books all day does harm to us students both physically and mentally.这句话用了动名词短语作主语；还有范文还使用了Besides, However, Therefore这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。