Question

第二节读写任务(共1小题,满分25分)
阅读下面短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文.
Jade means a lot in Chinese culture and is highy valued by the Chinese people.
Many people begin to wear one when they are young till they die, believing that it
will bring them good luck.
Every time I stop to think about which possession of mine means the most to me,
I find myself looking at my left wrist, around which is a simple jade bracelet. And this bracelet will always remind me of my culture and the individual that I am.
I remember very clearly the night my parents gave me the bracelet. It was in mysophomore (二年级)  year of high school, and I had stayed out at midnight. When Ifinally got home, my parents gave me a lecture on responsibility. I expected to beplaced on restriction, but instead they gave me a jade bracelet. I was totally
shocked...but when I went to bed that night I was supremely happy.
The next morning my father told me that because they had gone shopping for the
bracelet, he had not gone to the racetrack(赛马场), and had missed out on winning
$20,000 because of me. However, he said that I was worth it.
The bracelet will always remind me of those two days and the love that exists in my relationship with my parents, even though nothing is ever said. I know that no matter what I may do, my parents will always love me and accept me the way I am.
Since I got the bracelet, I have not taken it off--mostly because I don't want to. My bracelet means so much to me that if it should ever break, I would be enormously
upset, But then. I could always save the pieces for good luck.
【写作内容】   
1．以约30个词概括这篇文章中作者收到bracelet的感受．   
2．根据短文内容就父母亲给予孩子的爱这个主题发表你的看法，至少包括以下内
容要点。该部分的字数约120个词左右。
(1)在你心目中父母亲情的重要性；   
(2)结合自己的实例来说明父母亲的爱对你的影响。  
【写作要求】
1．作文中可使用实例或其它方法支持你的观点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但
不得直接引用原文中的句子；   
2．文章中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。   
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Answer 1

The girl was astonished to receive a jade bracelet from her parents instead of being scolded for her fault. She has valued it very much because it always reminds her of the love existing between her and her parents.
As the passage states, love plays an significant role in our life, especially the love between parents and children. Love from parents enables the child to gain more confidence to cope with difficulties, to realize his responsibilities and to become independent.
This passage also reminds me of a similar experience. There was a time when I was under great pressure from study and from relationship between my friends and
me. My personality changed. I withdrew from people, becoming unusually reserved
and anxious. My parents, of course, were very concerned, but they spared no effort to comfort me and give me guidance. They took me on a holiday, discussed the problems
that I was faced with, told me the stories of their youth and the same problems as they had came across. Eventually their efforts paid off and I got through the hard time. It is my parents' deep love that has made me what I am.
Love from parents is like sunshine, making us warm and united. Appreciate your
parents' love and you will find more strength in your life.

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