Question

18．假设你是李津，最近在你班的班会上进行了一次有关是否有必要在国外读大学的讨论会，请根据以下提示写一篇英文短文为校报投稿．
内容要点：1．优势：学校注重培养团队合作、环境优雅等   2．不足：费用高等    3．个人看法
注意：1．内容应包括以上所有要点；开头和结尾已经写出，不计入总词数；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，字数100；
Dear Editor of the school newspaper，
I contribute to your newspaper to introduce something about the recent class meeting of mine．
Our class has held a heated debate about whether going abroad or staying at home for college education recently．【高分句型一】（开头-引出话题）
Some students think that studying abroad is a good choice because there are lots of famous colleges abroad．【高分句型二】The environment there is nice and quiet．But the expense of studying abroad is rather high．Others prefer to study home．They believe that domestic colleges have excellent teams of teachers，the teaching equipment is advanced，and the tuition is lower．However，chances to practice are not as many as studying abroad．（正反双方论述各自的利弊）
As far as I am concerned，I choose domestic colleges．Although the domestic university may not be as good as the foreign university，culture difference is a big problem．【高分句型三】To study abroad，you must get over the obstacle of language and differences in behavior and habits．【高分句型四】（自己观点）
Yours，
Li Jin．

Answer 1

分析 本文是提纲类写作，根据文章所给提示信息写一篇短文，介绍就"是在国外读大学还是在国内读大学"这一问题的讨论形成的不同观点和看法． 
写作要点：1．开头-引出话题；2．赞成在国外上大学观点及依据；3．赞成在国内上大学观点及依据；4．自己的观点． 
写作时时态以一般现在时为主．人称以第一和第三人称为主． 
重要短语：hold a heated debate（进行一个热烈的讨论），go abroad（出国），prefer to（更喜欢），domestic colleges（国内大学），as far as sb be concerned（就某人所关注的而言），get over sth（克服某事），the obstacle of（…的障碍），the expense of （…的费用），be advanced（先进的），the chances to do sth（做某事的机会）． 
【高分句型一】
1．Our class has held a heated debate about whether going abroad or staying at home for college education recently． 
此处是连接词"whether"引导的宾语从句，主句为"Our class has held a heated debate"． 
【高分句型二】
2．Some students think①that ②studying abroad is a good choice because there are lots of famous colleges abroad． 
①此处是由连接词"that"引导的宾语从句，主句为"Some students think"． 
 ②此处为动名词作主语，谓语动词用单数形式． 
【高分句型三】
3．Although the domestic university may not be as good as the foreign university，culture difference is a big problem． 
此处是由连词"although"引导的让步状语从句，主句为"culture difference is a big problem"． 
【高分句型四】
4．To study abroad，you must get over the obstacle of language and differences in behavior and habits． 
  此处是由不定式短语"To study abroad"作目的状语，主句为"you must get over the obstacle of language and differences in behavior and habits"．

解答 Dear Editor of the school newspaper，
       I contribute to your newspaper to introduce something about the recent class meeting of mine．Our class has held a heated debate about whether going abroad or staying at home for college education recently．【高分句型一】（开头-引出话题） 
       Some students think that studying abroad is a good choice because there are lots of famous colleges abroad．【高分句型二】The environment there is nice and quiet．But the expense of studying abroad is rather high．Others prefer to study home．They believe that domestic colleges have excellent teams of teachers，the teaching equipment is advanced，and the tuition is lower．However，chances to practice are not as many as studying abroad．（正反双方论述各自的利弊） 
       As far as I am concerned，I choose domestic colleges．Although the domestic university may not be as good as the foreign university，culture difference is a big problem．【高分句型三】To study abroad，you must get over the obstacle of language and differences in behavior and habits．【高分句型四】（自己观点） 
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Jin．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．