Question

假如你是Ms Wang，你的学生李华给你写了封信，诉说他无法融入班集体及交友的苦恼，请你根据以下要点给他回一封建议信。
1. 积极参加班级活动；2. 了解同学们的兴趣爱好； 3. 乐于助人
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；3. 信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry you are having trouble in making friends. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you.
                                                                      
                                                                      
Yours, Ms Wang

Answer 1

Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry you are having trouble in making friends. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you.
Firstly, why not take an active part in discussion? If you do this, you can express your own opinions, and at the same time, learn to other people’s views.
Secondly， you should learn about your classmates’ likes and dislikes. Then you can find common interests with them. In this way, you can get to know more different people and show them that you are friendly.
Last but not least, it’s a good idea to be ready to help others in need. That way your classmates will like making friends with you and you’ll enjoy your school life together.
I hope you will find these suggestions useful.
Yours,
Ms Wang

试题分析：考查应用文中的书信的写作。你的学生李华给你写了封信，诉说他无法融入班集体及交友的苦恼，请你根据以下要点给他回一封建议信。要点都已经给出，书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文。
【亮点说明】If you do this, you can express your own opinions, and at the same time, learn to other people’s views.这句话用了if引导的条件状语从句， In this way, you can get to know more different people and show them that you are friendly.这句话用了宾语从句， it’s a good idea to be ready to help others in need.这句话用了it做形式主语，还有范文使用了Firstly,  Secondly，Last but not least,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。