Question

【题目】假定你是李华，听闻国外某网站要在全球范围内评选 “The Most Qualified Student”（最美中学生），请你用英语给该网站写一封推荐信。内容包括：

1. 介绍被推荐人（林扬）的基本信息；

2. 说明推荐理由。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头语给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Editor,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Editor,

I’m a senior high school student and I happened to hear that your website was hosting an activity to select The Most Quslified.It is a great honor for me to introduce to you one of my very best friends,Lin Yang.

First of all,he,who is among the most diligent students in our school,not only studies hard,but also behaves well.Secondly, he stands out for his diverse hobbies,including painting and playing the vioin.Last but not least,he is warm-hearted and willing to help others in need.

Therefore,I here recommend him to you with all my heart and I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest possible moment.

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇命题作文。文章内容要点已经给出。同学们在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：1.通篇以一般将来时为主。2.要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅。3.注意语气。语气应该比较恳切，有说服力。难点是向国外网站推荐说明林扬的优势，这一点最好有具体的例子做支撑，否则内容不够丰满。写这部分内容时，学生可以采取简单句和复合句结合的方法。

【范文亮点】：1.I’m a senior high school student and I happened to hear that your website was hosting an activity to select The Most Quslified.我是一名高中生，恰巧听闻贵网站正举办一个“最美中学生”的活动。（首先是happen to do句型的运用，以及高级词汇select的使用，最后是采用了以and连接的并列句）

2.First of all,he,who is among the most diligent students in our school,not only studies hard,but also behaves well.首先，他是我们学校最勤奋的学生，不仅学习努力，而且举止表现良好。（首先采用了以who引导的定语从句来修饰he, 其次，使用了以not only, but also连接的复合句）