Question

5．假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Paul已经学汉语六年，为了更好地学习汉语及了解中国文化，他来信希望你向他推荐一部中文名著或优秀中文电影．请你给他写一封回信．具体要求如下：
1．写信目的．
2．推荐理由（语言及文化方面）．
3．希望对方也能向你推荐一部英文名著或优秀英文电影．
注意：
1．字数100左右．
2．信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数．
参考词汇：推荐：recommend，文学名著：literary masterpiece
Dear Tom，
How is everything going？I am writing to share with you one of my favorite movies，The Road Home（推荐的理由）．It's a wonderful movie which is not only beneficial to your language study，but also helpful to your better understanding about common Chinese people's life（整体说明写信的目的）．
The film is well worth seeing．For one thing，the language in this Chinese movie may contribute to your study of Chinese in listening and speaking．For another，the cultural elements in the scene will equip you with Chinese cultural background，and above all，broaden your mind．Hope you can enjoy it（具体论述推荐的理由）．
I'll appreciate it if you can also recommend an English literary masterpiece or a wonderful English movie to me．（希望对方推荐一部英文名著或优秀英文电影）
I am looking forward to your reply．                 
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
It's a wonderful movie which（1）is not only beneficial to your language study，but also （2）helpful to your better understanding about common Chinese people's life．
（1）该句是以movie为先行词which引导的定语从句；
（2）not only…but also不但…而且…，常常连接并列的主语，谓语动词根据就近一致的原则；not only放在句首，要倒装．
句型二：
I'll appreciate it if…：如果…我将非常感激
appreciate表示"感谢，感激"，表示"喜好、厌恶"的动词后往往接形式宾语后再接从句．

解答 Dear Tom，
 How is everything going？I am writing toshare with you one of my favorite movies，The Road Home（推荐的理由）．It's a wonderful movie which is not only beneficial to your language study，but also helpful to your better understanding about common Chinese people's life【高分句型一】（整体说明写信的目的）．
The film is well worth seeing．For one thing，the language in this Chinese movie may contribute to your study ofChinese in listening and speaking．For another，the cultural elements in the scene will equip you with Chinese cultural background，and above all，broadenyour mind．Hope you can enjoy it（具体论述推荐的理由）．
I'll appreciate it if you can also recommend an English literary masterpiece or a wonderful English movie to me【高分句型二】．（希望对方推荐一部英文名著或优秀英文电影）
I am looking forwardto your reply．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

点评 写作时首先审题要到位：审体裁、人称和时态；审要点，根据题目的要求审要点．其次要考虑词语和句型的选用，词语和句型的选用要包含作者的感情色彩和增强表达的气势；再次，运用关联词如besides、what's  more、moreover、for one thing …for another等，使文字更加流畅．