Question

【题目】假如你叫李平，你的美国笔友Tom来信询问你暑假过的怎样。请根据以下信息给他回信，说明你在假期中的活动和理由。

活动	理由
休息	学习紧张，缺少锻炼和休息
看望乡下的祖父母	帮助他们做点家务，并给他们谈了身边的新鲜事
和朋友进行短途旅游	欣赏大自然，呼吸新鲜空气

注意：词数100左右。

Dear Tom,

I'm more than glad to receive your letter. And it's a pleasure to tell you something about how I spent the Summer holiday.

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Yours,

Li Ping

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

I'm more than glad to receive your letter. And it's a pleasure to tell you something about how I spent the Summer holiday.

To begin with, I had a good rest because recently I often felt tired as a result of my heavy study burden as well as lack of sleep and physical exercise. In addition, it took me two days to stay with my grandparents living in the countryside and help them do some housework and tell them what happened to me and my friends. What's more, I had a trip with my friends to appreciate the beauty of nature and breathe fresh air and the trip broadened my horizons and enriched my knowledge during pleasure.

What did you do in your summer holidays? I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Ping

【解析】

试题分析：本篇文章是一个提纲式作文，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、确定文章的总体框架，要在试题给出的立场的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。1.本文文法简单流畅，不拖泥带说，句式多样。 2.使用了多样词组 3.文章行文结构严密，能够结合自己的看法，具有现实意义 4.逻辑鲜明，思路清晰。在考场上可谓一篇高分佳作。