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4．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请给你的外教Mr．Black写一封邮件，邀请他参加你们学校举行的英语读书会（reading circle）活动，邮件的内容包括：
1．介绍读书活动的相关信息（例如：时间、地点、活动目的、内容等）；
2．说明你发出邀请的原因；
3．询问对方的意向．
注意：1．词数不少于100词；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Mr．Black，
I hope that everything goes on well with you．I'm writing to invite you to join us in the English reading circle to be held in our school．（高分句型一）We'll feel honored if you are present．
The activity is scheduled at 8：00 am this Friday in the auditorium．Aiming to improve the students'understanding of the beauty of foreign literature，the reading circle will allow students to communicate with each other face to face，sharing their own reading experience together．（高分句型二）
As we consider that you can give us some professional introductions to English literature and some valuable suggestions on English reading，we sincerely hope that you can come to join us．（高分句型三）
Would you be kind enough to spare some time for us？Thank you in advance．Hope to hear from you soon．
Your，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请给你的外教Mr．Black写一封邮件，邀请他参加你们学校举行的英语读书会（reading circle）活动，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：介绍读书活动的相关信息（例如：时间、地点、活动目的、内容等）；说明你发出邀请的原因；询问对方的意向．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：Aim to目的是；communicate with沟通，交流；face to face面对面；spare some time抽出时间；
I'm writing to invite you to join us in the English reading circle to be held in our school．（高分句型一）
Aiming to improve the students'understanding of the beauty of foreign literature，the reading circle will allow students to communicate with each other face to face，sharing their own reading experience together．（高分句型二）
As we consider that you can give us some professional introductions to English literature and some valuable suggestions on English reading，we sincerely hope that you can come to join us．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mr．Black，
       I hope that everything goes on well with you．I'm writing to invite you to join us in the English reading circle to be held in our school．（高分句型一）We'll feel honored if you are present．
      The activity is scheduled at 8：00 am this Friday in the auditorium．Aiming to improve the students'understanding of the beauty of foreign literature，the reading circle will allow students to communicate with each other face to face，sharing their own reading experience together．（高分句型二）As we consider that you can give us some professional introductions to English literature and some valuable suggestions on English reading，we sincerely hope that you can come to join us．（高分句型三）
      Would you be kind enough to spare some time for us？Thank you in advance．Hope to hear from you soon．
                                                                                                                                     Yours，
                                                                                                                                     Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．