Question

如今微信（WeChat）走进了人们的生活，为大家带来了诸多便利，但有些人也随之成了“微信控”(WeChataholic)，请你就此事写一篇文章。你的文章必须包括：此现象的描述和你对微信的看法

注意：1. 词数120左右；

2. 文中需要包含提示内容,可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

In recent years, Wechat is becoming increasingly popular. Many people express themselves, exchange ideas and deliver information by Wechat.

There are a number of reasons for Wechat to be known. To begin with, Wechat is a relative cheap way of communication, which cuts down a great deal of the cost of making a phone call. Next, Wechat is to the taste of the majority of people. Its attractive interface and various functions are loved wildly. Furthermore, convenience also accounts for its popularity. It is available everywhere and at any time.

However, problems exist meanwhile. Firstly, our identity can be revealed when we use Wechat. As a result, we can be in trouble. Moreover, it may make communicating with others face to face less. To make the matter worse, relationship could break down .Last but not the least, our attention might be drawn too much to focus on study.

That’s all. There is no doubt that Wechat will improve as time goes by.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇半开放性作文写作,话题是关于微信控，内容要考生围绕此现象的描述和你对微信的看法来展开，给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成此类作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮点说明】文章使用了很好的短语和句子：To begin with 首先，to the taste of符合某人的品味， the majority of people大多数人， accounts for 是…的原因，be in trouble有困难，To make the matter worse使情况更糟糕的是, break down崩溃。Wechat is a relative cheap way of communication, which cuts down a great deal of the cost of making a phone call.这句话使用了非限制性定语从句， There is no doubt that Wechat will improve as time goes by. 这句话使用了同位语从句。还有范文还使用了Next, Furthermore, Firstly, Moreover, Last but not the least, 这些关联词使文章更加连贯。

考点: 考查半开放类作文