Question

生活中人们常常需要做出决定，一些决定会对其产生重大影响，请叙述你曾经做出的一个对你产生重大影响的决定，并简要说明你的启示或感受，用英文写一篇100－120个词的短文。
注意：开头已给出，不计词数。
In life people make many important decisions．                                            
                                                                                        
                                                                                           
                  

Answer 1

In life people make many important decisions。Right decisions are so important that they affect us greatly.
My latest decision was made when I entered Senior 3 in Miss Zhang’s English class. Since I was not good at English, Miss Zhang asked me to listen attentively in class and put down some important notes. But I was never a good listener. I went on my own way ignoring her suggestion completely until Miss Zhang had a talk with me. She made me realize the importance of not taking. Then I decided to follow her to take notes in her class. Since then, my English has improved greatly .
From this experience , I have realized a good decision benefits people. We should learn to take people’s advice and do the right things.

试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮点说明】范文中出现一些常见的短语be good at擅长做某事； put down 放下；have a talk with sb 与某人交谈；decide to do决定做某事； take notes做笔记。take advice采取建议；I went on my own way ignoring her suggestion completely until Miss Zhang had a talk with me.这个句子中ignorew做伴随状语，until表示直到。。。Since then, my English has improved greatly 这个句子用了典型的since then，现在完成时。We should learn to take people’s advice and do the right things.这个句子中learn 与 do 是并列谓语动词。