Question

【题目】文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

One Monday morning,Mr Li, a famous scholar and schoolmate of our school was invited deliver a speech to us Senior 3 students. Mr Li graduated from our school twenty years ago but then studied in Beijing University. Instead of being a programmer, he followed his heart and become a musician after the graduation. He is now a well-known musician.

In his speech, he said that it was his hard works and efforts that made him who he is today. Though the circumstance was hard, he made fully use of everything to study, which contributed to be admitted to Beijing University. His speech was so inspired that all the students present expressed that we would work harder for a bright future.

Answer 1

【答案】1.加to

2.but改成and

3.become改成became

4.删除the

5.works改成work

6.who改成what

7.fully改成full

8.be改成being

9.inspired改成inspiring

10.we改成they

【解析】本文是一篇记叙文，主要讲述了从作者所在学校毕业，并考上北京大学的李先生努力奋斗的经历。李先生用自己的故事感染了很多人，并激励着学生不断前行。

考查固定词组。“a famous scholar and schoolmate of our school was invited deliver a speech to us Senior 3 students”，invite sb. to do sth.邀请某人做某事=sb. be invited to do sth.某人被邀请做某事。故添加to。

考查连接词。“ Mr Li graduated from our school twenty years ago but then studied in Beijing University”，Mr Li graduated from our school twenty years ago李先生20年前从我们学校毕业，“studied in Beijing University”在北京大学学习，连接词then 表示承接，所以前句与后句表示意思上的承接关系。故将but改为and。

考查动词时态。“he followed his heart and become a musician after the graduation”，根据followed可知此句时态为过去时，由and可知前后两句为并列句，因此，后句时态也应为过去时。故将become改为became。

考查冠词。“become a musician after the graduation”,此处的graduation毕业，表示泛指，并不是特指毕业这件事。故将the删掉。

考查名词。“it was his hard works and efforts”，work作为工作讲时，为不可数名词。故将works改为work。

考查连接词。“made him who he is today”分析句子，此句确少宾语成分，故将who改为what。

考查固定短语。“he made fully use of everything to study”，make full use of利用，为固定动词短语。故将fully改为full。

考查动词。“which contributed to be admitted to Beijing University”，contribute to doing sth.，后面应加动名词，故将be改为being。

考查形容词。“ His speech was so inspired that all the students present”，inspired表示人内心受到鼓舞，inspiring表示事情本身令人鼓舞。故将inspired改为inspiring。

考查物主代词。“all the students present expressed that we would work harder for a bright future”，分析句子，句子主语为all the students，所以后句主语应与前句主语相对应。故将we改为they。