Question

【题目】短文改错（共10 小题；每小题 1分，满分10分）

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧） ，并在下面加上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last Monday, we were having our Chinese lesson while the teacher suddenly slipped and fell. We were both worried about her. One of the boy carried her on his back, with the help of some others, to the hospital immediately. It turned out that her right leg was broken but she had to stay in hospital. The following day, we went to visit him with flowers and fruit. Seeing her lie in bed with her leg wrapped in bandages, we felt sorry for her and hoped that she will recover soon. This Thursday, she had returned to the class in a wheelchair to give us lessons. We were all deep moved and proud of having such responsible teacher.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】while → when

【2】both→ all

【3】boy → boys

【4】but→ and

【5】him → her

【6】lie→ lying

【7】will →would

【8】去掉had

【9】deep→ deeply

【10】such后加a

【解析】

试题分析：本文讲述了上周一我们的语文老师在上课时突然摔倒了，学生们立即将老师送去医院。老师的左腿骨折了需要在医院休息，但这周四，老师就返校坐着轮椅给我们上课，我们都十分感动并很自豪有这么负责的老师。

【1】while → when考察连词。While指一段时间，从句中的动词必须是延续性动词。When即指时间段，又指时间点，when引导的从句中动词可以是短暂性动词或延续性动词。Slip是短暂性动词，故把while改成when。

【2】both→ all 考察代词。Both指两个人或物，all指三个以上的人或物。同学的人数不只2个，故把both改成all。

【3】boy → boys考察搭配。固定搭配中one of the+ pl.boy应为复数形式。

【4】but→ and考察连词。but表示转折，and表并列关系。老师的腿骨折了并且她不得不住院。故把but改为and。

【5】him → her考察人称代词，文中提到语文老师是女的，故把him改为her。

【6】lie→ lying考察动词。see sb. do sth.强调看见某人做过某事see sb. doing sth.强调看见某人正在做某事。同学们看见老师正躺在床上，故把lie改成lying。

【7】will →would考察时态。本文故事发生在过去，一般过去时，will改成would。

【8】去掉had考察时态。This Thursday为一般过去时的时间标志，故去掉had。

【9】deep→ deeply考察副词。副词修饰动词，故把deep改成deeply。

【10】such后加a 考察固定搭配。such + a(n)+（adj.）+单数可数名词，故加a。