Question

【题目】假设你是李华，是一名高三学生。最近，你校广播站面向全体学生招募两名英语播音员(announcer)。你很想尝试一下，请根据下面的要点写一封自荐信。

1．自我介绍和写信的目的；

2．自身优势；

3．希望被录取。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已给出。

Dear Mr Li,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr Li，

I am Li Hua, a student in Class 1, Grade 3. Learning that our school radio station is looking for two English announcers, I wish to apply for the position.

I am greatly interested in broadcasting. I have received some professional training in my spare time. Now I would like to put what I have learned into practice. Besides, I am good at English, especially spoken English. I won first prize in the English Speech Competition last year. So I think I am highly qualified for the job. If admitted, I will try my best to serve the students. I sincerely hope you can give me a chance to work for the school radio station.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封自荐信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封自荐信；自荐到学校广播站做英语播报员。时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），包括自我介绍，自身优势等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【亮点说明】

范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如 Now I would like to put what I have learned into practice状语从句，宾语从句 If admitted, I will try my best to serve the students. I sincerely hope you can give me a chance to work for the school radio station.等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。