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11．假如你是李津．你的美国朋友Tom即将参加一个汉语演讲大赛，他为此感到十分紧张．因此，他用电子邮件向你咨询如何克服赛前的紧张情绪．请你根据以下要点给他写一封回信．1．表示理解并安慰；2．给出建议并说明理由；3．表达祝愿．
注意：1．词数不少于100字．2．可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；3．信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．
DearTom，
You wrote to ask for advice on how to get rid of your nervousness right before the Chinese speech contest．What you should remember is that most of people will feel nervous just like you．（高分句型一）Therefore，take it easy．I'd like to give you the following advice．
To begin with，you should prepare and understand the subject of your speech completely．The more familiar you are with the subject，the less nervous you feel．（高分句型二）Besides，another valid suggestion is to regardnervousnessas a good thing，which may give you the motivation to deliver your speech in an emotive way．（高分句型三）Last but not least，as the old saying goes，the confidence is the first secret of success．So believe in yourself and you will succeed．
I hope you will find these suggestions of great value．May you succeed in the competition．
Yours sincerely，
Li Jin．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假如你是李津．你的美国朋友Tom即将参加一个汉语演讲大赛，他为此感到十分紧张．因此，他用电子邮件向你咨询如何克服赛前的紧张情绪．请你根据以下要点给他写一封回信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：表示理解并安慰；给出建议并说明理由；表达祝愿． 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：get rid of去除，摆脱；Therefore因此；To begin with首先；Besides另外；Last but not least最后同样最重要；believe in相信；
What you should remember is that most of people will feel nervous just like you．（高分句型一）
The more familiar you are with the subject，the less nervous you feel．（高分句型二）
Besides，another valid suggestion is to regard nervousness as a good thing，which may give you the motivation to deliver your speech in an emotive way．（高分句型三）

解答 DearTom，
       You wrote to ask for advice on how to get rid of your nervousness right before the Chinese speech contest．What you should remember is that most of people will feel nervous just like you．（高分句型一）Therefore，take it easy．I'd like to give you the following advice．
       To begin with，you should prepare and understand the subject of your speech completely．The more familiar you are with the subject，the less nervous you feel．（高分句型二）Besides，another valid suggestion is to regard nervousness as a good thing，which may give you the motivation to deliver your speech in an emotive way．（高分句型三）Last but not least，as the old saying goes，the confidence is the first secret of success．So believe in yourself and you will succeed．
        I hope you will find these suggestions of great value．May you succeed in the competition．
                                                                                                                                                                                      Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                Li Jin

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．