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6．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线（一），并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
I've learned from the newspaper that your company is looking for receptionist．I'm very interesting in the job and I'd like to apply to the position．
First of all，allow me to introduce myself．I had just graduated from high school and taken the University Entrance Examination．I want to find out a part-time job this summer．I'm 18 year old and have a good command of English，especial in terms of speaking and listening．In fact，I once won the first prize in the English speech competition hold in our school．Besides，I'm quite easy-going but therefore very popular amon g my classmates．
I sincerely hope you can give us a chance．I'm looking forward to your reply．

Answer 1

分析 本文主要讲述作者申请接待员职位，并介绍自己符合的条件．比如：英语掌握得很好，在学校举行的英语演讲比赛中获过奖，人很随和，在同学中很受欢迎等．

解答 I've learned from the newspaper that your company is looking for∧receptionist．I'm very interesting in the job and I'd like to apply to the position．
First of all，allow me to introduce myself．I had just graduated from high school and taken the University Entrance Examination．I want to find out a part-time job this summer．I'm 18 year old and have a good command of English，especial in terms or speaking and listening．In fact，I once won the first prize in the English speech competition hold in our school．Besides，I'm quite easy-going but therefore very popular amon g my classmates．
I sincerely hope you can give us a chance．I'm looking forward to your reply．
详解：
1．加a 考查冠词．receptionist是可数名词，单数形式前加不定冠词a表示泛指．
2．interesting改为interested 考查固定搭配．be interested in意为"对…感兴趣"，是固定搭配．
3． to改为for 考查介词．根据句意：我想申请这个职位．apply for意为"申请"，是固定搭配．
4．had改为have 考查动词时态．根据句意：我刚高中毕业．根据句中副词just，用现在完成时态．
5．去掉out 考查词语用法．根据句意：我想找一个业余工作．find意为"找到"，find out意为"找出，查明"．此处应是：找到．
6．year改为years 考查名词复数．years old意为"…岁（指年龄）"，年龄超过一时，year用复数形式．
7．especial改为especially 考查副词．根据句意：尤其是在听说方面．结合语境可知此处用副词作状语修饰介词短语．
8．hold改为held 考查过去分词．此处指的是在我们学校举行的演讲比赛．过去分词作定语表示被动的动作，和被修饰词是动宾关系．
9．but改为and 考查连词．根据句意：我很随和，因此我在同学中很受欢迎．上下文之间是顺接关系，用连词and．
10．us改为me 考查代词．根据主语I可知此处指的是给我一个机会，用人称代词宾格me作宾语．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．