Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Nowadays, the electric bicycle is developing fast, many kinds of that can be seen on the road. It is popular with more and more people. Why? The reasons are simply.

First of all, it is much convenient than taking a bus or taxi. What's more important is that it saves strength and goes fast, so the rider feel less tired. Also it is easy of anybody to ride, whether old or young. Finally, it is not only energy-saving but also environmentally friendly.

Every coin has the two sides. The electric bike also has it’s disadvantages. On the one hand, the rider may lose the alternative to be physical involved while riding, which is not beneficial to health. On the other hand, it may also lead to more traffic accidents. Personally, the electric bicycle does our more good than harm. As long as the rider drives carefully, the number of accidents can greatly reduced.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】that→ which 或在many前加and

【2】simply→simple

【3】much→more或在much后加more

【4】feel→feels

【5】of→for

【6】删掉two前面的the

【7】it’s→its

【8】physical→physically

【9】our→us

【10】can后面加be

【解析】

试题分析：本文讲述了电动自行车的优势和劣势。

【1】that→ which 或在many前加and the electric bicycle作先行词，指物，后面用which引导非限制性定语从句；如果在两个分句之间加and构成并列句，则不必改that了。

【2】simply→simple be动词后面用形容词作表语，故把simply改为simple。

【3】much→more或在much后加more 根据后面的than可知，此句用比较级，convenient是多音节词，构成比较级要在前面加more，much可以修饰比较级加强语气，故把much改为more或在much后加more。

【4】feel→feels 句子是一般现在时态，主语是the rider，故把feel改为feels。

【5】of→for It is easy for sb. to do sth.“对于某人来说做某事容易”，故把of改为for。

【6】删掉two前面的the Every coin has the two sides.每枚硬币都有两方面，这里不表示特指， the是多余的，故删掉。

【7】it’s→its 句意：电动自行车也有它自己的优势。前面已经有主语和谓语了，这里应该用its，形容词性物主代词来修饰后面的名词，故把it’s改为its。

【8】physical→physically 副词修饰过去分词，故把physical改为physically。

【9】our→us 固定词组：do sb. good/harm对某人有益或有害，故把our改为us。

【10】can后面加be 句意：只要骑手小心骑，事故数量能极大的被减少。number与reduce是被动关系，故在can后加be。

【知识归纳】

1. 以e结尾的形容词变成副词时，有的直接加ly ;有的把e去掉再加ly.

possible---possibly；simple---simply；gentle---gently；terrible---terribly；true---truly；flexible---flexibly；immediate---immediately；brave---bravely；wise---wisely；active---actively

2. 下面的词或词组可以放在比较级前面修饰比较级加强语气：much/even/a lot/a little/any/still/far/slightly/a great deal.

比如：I felt much happier.我感觉幸福多了。