Question

假设你是星光中学的李华，将参加主题为“Let’s Ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容可包括：目前汽车带来的空气污染、交通堵塞等问题；

骑自行车的益处，如节能环保，有利健康

         参考词汇：低碳生活（low-carton life）  节能（energy  saving）

         注意：1.词数：120词左右；演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，该部分不计入总词数。

Good morning, everyone,

         I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Let’s Ride Bicycles”.

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Thank you for listening!

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Good morning, everyone,

I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School.  The topic of my speech today is “Let's Ride Bicycles”. As we know, air pollution and heavy traffic are becoming increasingly severe due to the overuse of cars. Therefore, it’s high time we chose another means of transport－cycling.

Compared to cars, bicycles are much cheaper to buy and maintain, and we don't have all the added costs of fuel and parking. What's more, bicycles are more environmentally friendly than cars and cycling is a good way of energy-saving and low-carbon life. Last but not least, cycling is can help keep fit and live longer. By riding bicycles, you can cut down your risk of heart attacks, high blood pressure and other illnesses. So, let's ride bicycles from today on!

Thank you

【解析】

试题分析：本题为材料作文，根据高考的评分要求，从两个方面分析题目。一是内容：文中要求写到的是五个方面的内容，即形成了文章的主体。五个内容之间要具有连贯性且要有开头和结尾，形成一定的逻辑。二是语言方面。要有精华的句子，起到画龙点晴的作用。例如，固定结构，倒装，强调等。

【亮点说明】所给范文开头紧扣题目，起到了开篇点题的作用。文章中上下文的衔接句成了本范文的一个亮点，What's more, Last but not least, So等的使用使文章浑然一体。

考点: 考查学生语言的综合运用能力