Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。为了表达对抗疫英雄的敬意，你们年级组织了“网络同唱一首歌”活动。请你根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文稿件，记述这一过程。

注意：词数不少于60。

Answer 1

【答案】Last month, we took part in an activity organized by our grade to sing the same song on the Internet to show our respect to the heroes who fought with COVID-19, which proved to be a meaningful and memorable experience.

On Monday, our teacher informed us of the news that we would sing the same song online “Let the world full of love”, which should be sent to Mrs. Wang before February 26th. Hearing that, I became very excited because I wanted to express my admiration to the heroes fighting with the disease. Although it was a challenging task, we regarded it as a precious opportunity to show our respect to the heroes.

The next few days, I searched the song on the Internet and found how to sing it well. Having learnt the melody and the lyrics, I began to record it. So difficult was it to record it that I tried many times and eventually I made it and uploaded it in time to Mrs. Wang.

Hardly had Mrs. Wang collected all the songs when she began to combine them into one and sent it on the internet. As we heard the song sung by all the students in our grade, I was deeply moved, thinking of the touching moments when different people contributed their strength to helping each other.

I posted the activity on the WeChat Moments and it was not long before that I received many praises and likes. I felt that we were living in the same world which was full of love. With the joint efforts, we could conquer all the challenges and make our world better.

【解析】

这是一篇图画类作文。

第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。为了表达对抗疫英雄的敬意，你们年级组织了“网络同唱一首歌”活动。请你根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文稿件，记述这一过程。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：take part in(参加)；on the Internet (在网上)；fight with (与……战斗)；meaningful and memorable (有意义和难忘的)；inform of (通知)等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时和过去完成时。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。