Question

【题目】 短文改错

My summer vacation was divided in four parts. First , I went traveling with my cousin which is the same age as me. We went to many places of interests in China and enjoyed myself very much. And we planned to travel abroad next summer. Then I learned to play guitar. I went to my guitar class three times a week and practice a lot during the vacation. I still played music in my spare time and felt quite relaxing. Then I spent a lot of time read classic works by famous writers. What’s more, since my mom was busy, I helped do many housework. I expect the next summer will come over soon!

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】in改为into

【2】which改为who

【3】interests改为interest

【4】myself改为ourselves

【5】play之后加the

【6】practice改为practiced

【7】relaxing改为relaxed

【8】read改为reading

【9】many改为much

【10】删掉over

【解析】

【1】in改为into；考查固定短语，be divided into..被划分为..因此用into。

【2】which改为who；原文中提到I went traveling with my cousin who is the same age as me.我和与我同龄的堂兄一起旅游了。可知who引导的定语从句主语是人，而which是指物。

【3】interests改为interest;考查固定短语，名胜古迹，应该表达为places of interest。所以去掉s。

【4】myself改为ourselves；根据原句We went to many places of interests in China and enjoyed myself very much.（我们参观了中国的许多名胜古迹，并且玩的很愉快）可知整个句子的主语是we，and连接一个并列句，所以后面的句子主语也是we，应用ourselves。

【5】play之后加the；考查固定搭配。play后加乐器要加定冠词the，如play the piano, play the violind，play the guitar等，因此应该加the.

【6】practice改为practiced；考查句子时态。根据原句I went to my guitar class three times a week and practice a lot during the vacation.可知前一部分是一般过去时，and连接并列句，后面也同样用一般过去时。

【7】relaxing改为relaxed；relaxing修饰物，而relaxed修饰人，原文是讲我感到很放松，所以应用relaxed。

【8】read改为reading；考查固定短语，spend time on sth或spend time (in) doing sth.（花费时间在某事上或花费时间做某事），所以应该用reading。

【9】many改为much；many+可数名词复数，much+不可数名词，housework是不可数名词，与much搭配。

【10】删掉over；根据句意：我希望下个暑假尽快到来！come over是顺便来访、过来的意思，与原文不符。所以应用come，直接表示到来。