Question

你校正在开展创建和谐校园系列活动，其中包括“做文明学生，创和谐校园”英语演讲比赛，请根据以下要点准备一篇演讲稿，参加该活动。

1．文明行为使校园和谐，也是学生高素质的体现 2．文明行为：讲礼貌，有爱心； 维护校园环境，爱护一草一木； 勤奋学习，遵守校规 ……

注意：1．词数不少于80 ； 

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．开头语与结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

4．参考词汇；

文明行为civilized behaviors   和谐harmony (n.)

Good afternoon, teachers and students．I feel honored to make a speech here．The title is “Be a Civilized Student, Construct a Harmonious School”．

                                                                       

                                                                       

That’s all．Thank you!

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Good afternoon, teachers and students．I feel honored to make a speech here．The title is “Be a Civilized Student, Construct a Harmonious School”．

As everybody knows, civilized behaviors are of great importance for a student．They not only show our good qualities but also make ourselves enjoy the harmony of school life, in which we can gain a better result of study．

How can we develop civilized behaviors? The first important thing we should do is to be a student with good manners and a student always ready to help people in need．Besides, we should keep the school environment clean. Never destroy the plants in our school, such as flowers, trees and grass. Most importantly, we should remember hard working and obeying the school rules make up the most necessary civilized behaviors as a student．

That’s all．Thank you!

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。