Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，以“A Special Celebration for the New Year”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍元旦期间你参加集邮协会组织的新年邮展活动的完整过程。词数不少于60。

A Special Celebration for the New Year

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Answer 1

【答案】A Special Celebration for the New Year

On New Year’s Day I went to a stamp exhibition, which proved to be a unique experience.

At 9:00, I arrived at the exhibition with my precious stamp album, eager and excited. To my delight, there gathered crowds of stamp lovers. Immediately I joined them and studied the stamps one by one. I was deeply immersed in the artists’ delicate design and wanted to learn more. Then, some of us got together in twos and threes to share our collections, chatting cheerfully about the stamps and stories behind them like old friends. Time passed quickly and it was time to say goodbye to these friends. We took pictures together and made promises to meet again.

I had a great time today. Not only did I appreciate beautiful stamps, but also I made new friends of the same interest. This was really a special celebration for the New Year.

【解析】这是一篇看图写作，一共四幅图。做题时：1. 认真读图，可知四幅图讲述的是元旦期间你参加集邮协会组织的新年邮展活动的完整过程，2. 初步构思，考虑用词、短语、句型和时态。3. 连词成句，然后再连句成文。尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容。4. 反复审核，修改错误。5. 注意所给的汉语提示。一般说来，看图写话中的汉语提示往往给定了有关的时间、地点、人物等相关的信息。串连时，要注意使用适当的连接词语或过渡性语句，不至于让读者觉得文章中出现跳跃现象，更使上下文更为紧凑、自然。

【亮点说明】

本文使用了高级句式增加了文章亮点，如：

On New Year’s Day I went to a stamp exhibition, which proved to be a unique experience.定语从句；some of us got together in twos and threes to share our collections, chatting cheerfully about the stamps and stories behind them like old friends.非谓语结构；Not only did I appreciate beautiful stamps, but also I made new friends of the same interest.倒装句。