Question

【题目】假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Henry 最近来信,询问你的暑期安排。请胸根据以下要点,用英语回一封信,说明你的计划,并简述理由。

1.休息;2.读书;3.陪伴父母;4.参加社会活动;

注意:1.词数100左右,信的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入总词数);

2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节,使行文连贯;

3.参考词汇:社会活动——social activities

Dear Henry,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】I’m glad to receive your letter. It’s a pleasure for me to tell you my plan of this coming summer vacation.

First of all, a good rest is needed because I do feel tired after the hard work of all these years. Of course, I’ll do some reading for fun, and for knowledge as well. I’ll spend some time staying with my parents, chatting with them and doing some housework. They’ve done so much for me, you know. If possible, I’ll take part in some social activities so that I can know more about the society.

Best wishes!

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本次作文要求用英语回一封信，说明你的暑期计划，并简述理由。要点如下：1.休息；2.读书；3.陪伴父母；4.参加社会活动。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。要注意书写，认真查验是否有漏写情况等。

写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：文章运用了省略句和结果状语从句If possible, I’ll take part in some social activities so that I can know more about the society.等。