Question

【题目】Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

假设你是明启中学的高三学生卢平。学校英语报向高三学生进行征文，题目为My dream。卢平也想投稿。稿件内容必须包含：

1. 近来，我反复地做着相同的梦：我捧着那纸温暖的大学录取通知书……

2. 社会教育、学校教育和家庭教育都会给予我力量去实现梦想。

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Answer 1

【答案】 Recently, I have been dreaming repeatedly about the same dream that after three years of hard studying, I finally received admission letter from my ideal university. I was so excited that I couldn't believe I really made it. Holding the letter, I rushed into the room to show it to my mother who was doing housework, and then I called my teacher to tell her about this exciting news, who was happy and proud of me, and I showed my most sincere gratitude to both of my mother and teacher again and again, saying without their support and encouragement, I couldn't have made this achievement.

I know this is just a beautiful dream, and realizing this dream depends on my determination and perseverance, as well as the support and encouragement of teachers and parents.

【解析】

本篇书面表达是提纲类作文，要求写一篇征文。

第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一篇征文：假设你是明启中学的高三学生卢平。学校英语报向高三学生进行征文，题目为My dream。卢平也想投稿。稿件内容必须包含：1. 近来，我反复地做着相同的梦：我捧着那纸温暖的大学录取通知书；2. 社会教育、学校教育和家庭教育都会给予我力量去实现梦想。时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； admission letter（录取通知书），ideal（心仪的、理想的），perseverance（坚持不懈），determination（决心）， support（支持），gratitude（感激），repeatedly（反复地）及realize（实现）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。